umm...
Well, i was expecting a little more, let's go for parts:
Art:
The pixel art is very good, in fact i liked it. The furry characters have charisma.
Dialogues:
They are good, but they could been better, the tittle suggest a little sarcasm, maybe if you add a little more humor it can improve
Gameplay:
There isnt a lot of it, maybe you can explode more the idea, or twist it a little, "TLOAPIOFWC" is an action like tittle, maybe you can add some shoting escenes, or a few platformer secuences, its a good try, but it can be whole better, your imagination is the limit ;3
Music:
Well, 'cause of the slow gameplay, this cant be aplied at full capacity.
Story:
Just like the gameplay, its a good try, but needs a little twist.